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Filter = movie spoiler. Sort of.

if you haven't read the book and haven't seen the movie and want to do one/both of those things, DON'T LOOK. k? thnx



OH YEAH. THE LOCKET SCENE WAS A+ SO I HAD TO DRAW IT
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Also, anyone else think the actors act so much better compared to like, the first movie? Hurray! ♥
AM SO HIGH ON HP RIGHT NOW, IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY.
Happy Thanksgiving!

Characters (c) J.K. Rowling
Art (c) me.
:)
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Hey! Dude, I am the slowest ever. I am so super sorry. OKAY

I think if you're trying to suggest 'creepy' or 'evil', you've done that. The use of green and the spiders at the bottom of the image do a good job of conveying that there is foul magic afoot~*~*.

COMPOSITION
While you do get the mood across, I think it could have been pushed further. Everything here is straightforward - here they are, rising from this locket. The locket is flat on the ground, and they come straight out of it. What if this was depicted at an angle - like, if you'd shifted this whole thing to be from a little bit more of a bird's eye view? I haven't seen the movie scene so I don't know how accurate this is, but what if the 'magic effects' of them coming out of the locket formed a more striking graphic element, with twists and turns (as allowed by the composition)? What if it wasn't centered? I know you probably don't want to go back and redo the entire picture, which is more then fair. It's just something to keep in mind in the future! Sometimes it helps to draw a bunch of thumbnail sketches until you get something you feel is 'dynamic'.

LIGHTING
Consider reflecting some of that green light onto the environment down there (on the floor and on the spiders). I don't think it would be too difficult; you could even throw that green on a separate layer and play around with layer effects if you are wary of painting it directly onto the environment.

ANATOMY
The anatomy in this picture is interesting. There are some places where I think it's pretty good (for instance, their faces, necks, and shoulders), and then places where it's ineffective, like Harry's pecs (though honestly I didn't even know he had pecs, should I be surprised? Does he have pecs? Whoa.), his torso, his arms, and both of their hands. I assume you used reference for both of the actors' faces - consider using it for their bodies, too. Using a reference for things like Harry's torso would teach you more about anatomy than I could by nitpicking it. c:

I'm not sure who the female is, but her anatomy reads a lot better, if stylized (her body is smaller vs. her head than is realistic).

Harry's left (our right) arm down to where their hands meet is the thing that stands out most to me, and is probably worth correcting. I can't tell if you made his arm shorter so it could meet the female's hand, or if his arm is supposed to be bent, and the perspective isn't telling us that. In either case, his upper arm appears shorter than the lower arm, and the total length of the arm isn't right (usually a person's elbow hits between the bottom of the ribcage and their navel). I notice that you did this with the female; again, she's got much stronger anatomy. Harry's left arm has the sort of 'puffiness' to it that tells me you mean for him to be a buff dude, but again, reference is your bro in these situations. There is sooooooooo much reference of buff dudes on the Google. You will never run out of it.

Their hands - did you use reference? The IDEA is correct, that's what hands would do in that situation, but the forms aren't quite right. Harry's hand seems to be missing knuckles. If you did use a reference, don't forget about landmarks (bony prominences, hollows between bone structure, etc.).

Something I find helpful with hands is to draw them out schematically - you want to make note of all your landmarks, like all the protrusions of the bones of the hand/thumb (I do this with circles). That kind of thing can help you avoid both impossible hands, and hands that are missing landmarks/look boneless.

ANYWAY, thanks for your patience <3 Sorry for the long wait!
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stuff-I-do Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
this is amazing!♥ i loved Hermione's evil-sensual expression.
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DemonFoxRaider Featured By Owner May 30, 2011
I luv this
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner May 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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DemonFoxRaider Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
your welcome this is how i pictured it too ^^
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh great! :lol:
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DemonFoxRaider Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011
^^
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Ashley-Q Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work! Your use of lighting and color is fantastic. Definitely creates an eerie, magical setting, which of course works well for the characters. :)
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner May 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :huggle:
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:iconroyalfuichiu:
royalfuichiu Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010
I really saw this scene in the movie :D
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:) Yay!
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royalfuichiu Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010
Well, yeah. :D
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:iconkeepsakedesigns:
KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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:iconroyalfuichiu:
royalfuichiu Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010
:)
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:iconjmcosplay:
JMCosplay Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist
that was an amazing part in the movie lol i enjoyed that part.
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:iconkeepsakedesigns:
KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod::nod:
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:iconjmcosplay:
JMCosplay Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010  Hobbyist
lol more for a guy then a girl tho
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Emeryx09 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
Awesome! Lol, they look like merpeople.
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:iconkeepsakedesigns:
KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lmao you're right!
Thanks a lot for the :+fav:!
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brandi3981 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG STAB IT RON DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON'T LISTEN 2 IT
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:iconkeepsakedesigns:
KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:lol::lmao:
Thanks for the fave!
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tiptoelemonade Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Student Photographer
This is wonderful!
Haha, there were little kids in the audience and I was just like
"AAAH! CHILDREN BEING EXPOSED TO SEXEH BODIES!" XD
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :huggle:
I KNOW! Why do they even let little kids see this film? I was really surprised!
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tiptoelemonade Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010  Student Photographer
They need to go back and start all over with the first movie and watch it in order with their age like most of us did! >.<
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Couldn't agree more! :)
I bet more than half of them haven't even read the books. Sad.
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RedHeadQueen Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
: D Awesome! This is one of the best illustrations of that scene :D
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:iconkeepsakedesigns:
KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow that's really sweet. Thank you so much!
Thanks for the fave too! :huggle:
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faithfullly Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I seriously wanted to close my eyes during this scene in the movie, but boy, it was so well done!
Terrific work on this picture, I love the color scheme! Awesome, awesome :heart:
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha it was pretty darn good! ♥ Thank you!
Thank you so much for the fave too! :huggle:
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faithfullly Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome, it was well deserved! :hug:
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Anethia Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
Looks really great ! :D
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you! :hug:
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ohjimmyjazz Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Student Filmographer
I loved that scene and I love this! It looks great!

And oh I too am all high on HP since last night when I saw the movie, I'm gonna have to read the books all over again, I've got HP cravings! *__*
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :huggle:
OH YES. I've started reading the series all over again! Best books ever written. ♥
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WorldOfSpiders Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010
Yes, I liked it too. And Emma finally acted well!
And their kiss was so... so... Well, I like it ;D
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:iconkeepsakedesigns:
KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree, she seemed a lot more confident. :)
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Jessiphia Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
excellently done! I love the way you colored it, and used the green to bring out the red in their eyes! also love the blatant censorship there, :rofl:
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:lmao:
Thank you!
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ladyrandomm13 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010  Student
You're high on HP too? Wow I thought I was being overlyhappy...anyway
Nice art! I loved this scene^^
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
OH YES. Very high indeed. :lol:
Thank you!
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ladyrandomm13 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010  Student
Welcome!
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YoukaiYume Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I think my actual favorite part of this are the wee little spiders scuttling at the bottom.
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Them sneaky little spiders.
Thank you for noticing.

And for the fave too! :aww:
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Livadialilacs Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love love love that scene. It's so great and I agree that it deserves the A+!! I wanna see it again, like now!! Beautiful drawing. ;)
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I KNOW RIGHT? More like A++ actually.
I'm dying to see it again, it was...magical. ;)
Thank you for the fave!
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Livadialilacs Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know! It was magical indeed. :faint:

And you're very welcome! :D
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Minzile Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010   General Artist
this looks so crazy ^^. but i like it :la:
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay thanks! :)
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Glee-chan Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this scene also. I also think it's hilarious that Dan and Emma had more sexual chemistry and Dan and Bonnie, which has all the charm of a wet mop.
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KeepsakeDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
So true. Ginny/Harry is a joke.
Thanks for the comment and :+fav:
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komodomatta Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2010
/hasn't read nor watched

NOOOOO.
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